Wednesday, March 23, 2011

Theme Thursday ; Paper

oh dear friend
Paper of this book behold my modest gift
I give you my joy and tears
I give you my soul
and I give you
the ticks of the clock
and the noise of the street
I give you the recipe of me
words that dare not depart from my mouth
I teach you
secrets un_known to this world
I  confine in you
the scent of you
is my drug of truth
all is revealed
all masks are dropped
and I stand naked before you
so behold my modest gift
my greatest burden
with no allure  
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15 comments:

  1. The PoetMarch 23, 2011 at 8:28 AM

    Very nice poem.

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  2. un-speackable love 2March 23, 2011 at 10:50 AM

    thanks ur too kind :)

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  3. sweet pea.March 23, 2011 at 5:53 PM

    hi =)
    thanks for stopping by,
    and for commenting.
    =D
    <3

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  4. MERYL JAFFE, PhD - parent, psychologist, teacher, author...March 23, 2011 at 6:52 PM

    The power of print!
    Meryl
    http://departingthetext.blogspot.com

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  5. chrisdMarch 23, 2011 at 9:12 PM

    That's a beautiful poem. You have a good relationship with paper. To me, it's daunting and a little scary!

    Beautiful!

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  6. MeriMarch 24, 2011 at 8:50 AM

    We who write do leave our imprint on paper, even if we don't send our words hurling into the ether for public consumption. How sad that your love is closeted!

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  7. ChristineMarch 24, 2011 at 10:39 AM

    Paper can leave such a story behind to those who find it. Great poem.

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  8. un-speackable love 2March 24, 2011 at 2:06 PM

    thx for you all , @chrisd it's a bit scary for me too as the truth always is , when u write your with your self and you can't lie , because then you read your lies , @ meri we who write admire co_writers as you , very will said , @ christine thx alot for your comment .

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  9. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallMarch 24, 2011 at 5:53 PM

    wow..

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  10. ReflectionsMarch 24, 2011 at 6:42 PM

    Paper, pages, words or art covering the space of our beings... Wonderful reminder.

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  11. un-speackable love 2March 25, 2011 at 1:29 AM

    @jingle thx alot , @ Reflections very will said they are indeed , thx for stopping by .

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  12. Cynthia MMarch 26, 2011 at 12:10 AM

    Writing is a whole other level, and you've conveyed it beautifully :)

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  13. un-speackable love 2March 26, 2011 at 1:17 PM

    @cynthia oh thank you so much :)

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  14. Shanae BranhamMarch 31, 2011 at 4:41 PM

    Very deep. Is the greatest gift you are giving ~ yourself?

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  15. un-speackable love 2April 1, 2011 at 1:23 PM

    yes the true reflection of me ,very smart note , thx for ur support :)

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